A rare stone from Egypt
I visited Egypt as an tourist.. .,
Got struck into a unknown place. ....
Find a shining stone. .. . . ...
Keep it into bag.. ... .
Got help from other people.... .
See mysterious things happening with stone... .
Get to know about reality of stone.....
Start facing problems....
Destroyed it... .
Thank you.
Nice Dipank. Nice climax and rising action but some grammatical mistakes.
ReplyDeletePlease share my mistakes
DeletePast tense. Visited, got help.
DeleteYes , the plot is exciting just use the proper way of writing outline.
ReplyDeleteNice Dipank.
ReplyDeleteI am exciting to know more about it.
Nice
ReplyDeleteIt is going to be q Amazing journey.
ReplyDeleteReality is very hard to accept.