Invisible ink


Part one

This is the beginning of 19th century, when I born in a middle class family, in Switzerland. 

I was the only child of my parents. That's  why I  was favorite one in the whole family.

After 20 years 


It was the day of Christmas, we moved on to India, delhi. 

But still we like to celebrate Christmas. 

We are in a mall. Attending a party for Christmas. 

I was enjoying a lot, suddenly a beautiful girl come towards me in very hurry and I can say that she is full of fear and confusion. 

Suddenly she come and hold my hand and and give me a pen, and just said that " Hope we will meet soon, till then hold it for me".


And she just put a slip in my pocket and run from there. 

Then suddenly a blast happen in party. 

Next day

 I opened my eyes after a day in hospital laying on bed, no one from my family and friends know that what happened that day. 

But I can conclud that the whole Matter is all related to the beautiful girl. 

I was just thinking about her and suddenly I thought about the pen. 

And I checked my pockets, I got the pen there in safe condition, but I just hold it in pocket, because I want to meet that girl once again 

And that will be only possible when I keep pen in safe condition. 

Then I say slip in my pocket, I take it out of pocket, and try to see what's written on it, but I was not able to read, it. 


May be it happens that nothing was written  there. But still I fall in love with her so I just keep it in a safe place. 

In some time I got discharge from hospital and start wondering about her. 

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To be continue 









Part 2 


I am in my college, where I found the same girl in a classroom. But suddenly she disappear. 

This happens to me many times, she appears then go somewhere, 

But one thing I noticed that she was full of confidence and without any fear. 

That show that she is safe now. 

But still my confusion is getting increasing day by day. But i am waiting for the day when I get to know about the girl and the whole matter. 


Next time

I was going with friends to the movie hall, suddenly our car involves in accident and some robbers start fighting with us, magically she also arrived there to save me from robbers, fighting is just happening continuously but suddenly my alarm ⏰ start ringing and I found that all that was just a dream๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿ’ญ, a beautiful and adventurous dream. 


The day starts as usual, workout then breakfast and then collage. But today miss varsha ( our English educator) introduce us a new  student and she was same girl whom I was finding since a long time ๐Ÿ’•. 

After class she came toward me and ask for pen, I say that pen is at home in safe condition, but she ask me to return pen as soon as possible and hold my hand, start walking out of call towards my home to take pen back. 

After arriving home I told her to wait outside because of parents, and go inside to take pen back, when I open door of my room I found her in  my room finding pen here and there. I shout in a calm manner, to stop her . I give her pen  and ask about what's the mystery of this pen. 

She was just to share information about pen suddenly my phone start ringing, when I pic call I found me and girl in a different world, dangerous, mysterious, fearful but still loving also, ust because of her. 

We moved forward she start explaining me about whole story. Actually she is from future arrived from time machine to save universe from upcoming disaster with the help of me and her super power. 


I asked her why I, not anyone else, she explains me about the locket in my neck with magical spells. Which I received from my grandfather. When I born. 

Till now I got it that we need to fight with someone to save universe from upcoming possible disaster. 

Something big is going to happen..... 


To be continue.. .. .. 






Comments

  1. Nice starting .. and raising action were there. But may be nothing was written there๐Ÿ˜‚

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    1. The inciting is good.my favorite was rising action, sorry don't you think the Climax was quite small. I think your plan is to make it a longer web series that's why we are missing the climax and resolution. ☺☺

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  2. The story was nice you included the turning point great ๐Ÿ‘I'm curious about what next you met this girl or not ๐Ÿ˜‚

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    1. Sure we will disclose it soon.

      Keep watching it.

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  3. Well prepared story with good inciting incident, rising action , climax could be better and hope to see a happy ending.

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